This week we started writing a descriptive piece of writing... Here is the picture that we had to base our piece of writing around. Here is my piece of writing and some brainstorming... I am not quite finished my writing...
Hi Kaleb Its Morgan here. Wow that is great I really like how you said "The trickling water slowly and softly flowing down stream picking up any loose rocks and sticks and taking hem". I think that this is a Fabulous piece of writing. E noho ra bye
Kia Ora Kaleb Thank you so much for including your brainstorm as it gives me an idea of where you got your ideas from. It was great that you worked through the senses. My favourite one of this is smell: I smell the dark blood red flowers. It is good that you managed to put this into your story as well. I hope you were able to write like this in your writing test. Nga mihi Mrs England
Hi Kaleb Its Morgan here. Wow that is great I really like how you said "The trickling water slowly and softly flowing down stream picking up any loose rocks and sticks and taking hem". I think that this is a Fabulous piece of writing. E noho ra bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kaleb
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for including your brainstorm as it gives me an idea of where you got your ideas from. It was great that you worked through the senses. My favourite one of this is smell: I smell the dark blood red flowers. It is good that you managed to put this into your story as well.
I hope you were able to write like this in your writing test.
Nga mihi
Mrs England