Welcome to my blog, I am a learner at Greymouth High School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Hi KalebI really enjoyed reading your diary entry, you have used descriptive language to help create a feeling of sadness and the reader to create an image in their mind.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hi Kaleb
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your diary entry, you have used descriptive language to help create a feeling of sadness and the reader to create an image in their mind.