Friday 2 June 2017

Cross Country

This week we had the Grey Main School cross country. I got 5th equal with my friend Alex. I wrote a story about it. Here is a picture of my writing.  I was not looking forward to this but I ended up getting 5th place, I was so happy with my results. My WALT was to write a story about the cross country. 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kaleb,this is a great piece of writing about the cross country. I like how you are experimenting with a variety of punctuation and language. Next time you could check your photo of your writing is easy to read before posting as it is a little blurry.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.