Hi Kaleb, Miss Hines here. Thanks for sharing your work with us. I really like the way you have used descriptive language in your diary entry and I especially like the way you have used a rhetorical question! Are you enjoying our topic? What is the most interesting thing that you have learnt so far? I can't wait to see your fake Faecbook Page completed. Keep up the hard work, Miss Hines :-)
I really enjoyed reading your diary entry. You have really captured the feeling of living during this time. Its just so sad. I am really enjoying the work that your class is doing around this topic and I hope that you are too. Keep up the good work! :)
Hi Kaleb, Miss Hines here. Thanks for sharing your work with us. I really like the way you have used descriptive language in your diary entry and I especially like the way you have used a rhetorical question! Are you enjoying our topic? What is the most interesting thing that you have learnt so far? I can't wait to see your fake Faecbook Page completed. Keep up the hard work, Miss Hines :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Kaleb
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your diary entry. You have really captured the feeling of living during this time. Its just so sad. I am really enjoying the work that your class is doing around this topic and I hope that you are too. Keep up the good work! :)