Thursday 30 April 2015

World war 1

On the 25 of April we remember all the solders  that went to war from New Zealand and Australia that went to to fight in Gallipoli and got shot and killed.

In Flanders field the poppies grow,between the solders crosses, where the bombs was going of and the tank was passing throw and people falling dead and gun shots echoing in the land.


When the solders went to war there Wife's  and Mums made them Anzac biscuits .Anzac biscuits was chewy and hard ,Anzac biscuits was ginger nuts.



In the Wars there was Trenches, Trenches were used to hide from the enemies.  In the enemies Trenchers the Turks would dig and get dirt, gravel, stones and dirt, in the British Trenchers the Aussies had the same job as the Turks.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Kaleb
    That is a really good story about world war one I like how you used describing words for your writing it made the story work really well maybe next time you could use a little more punctuation not much but a little more

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