Wednesday 10 June 2015

Myst Description



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Kaleb - The giant rocks are making the water look like it goes right down, it looks like the water is as deep as the Eiffel tower.  The trees surrounding the water and making the water cold because the trees are trapping the sun from the water.
the rocky landscape surrounding the pools of water.  The tall trees look like they are touching the clouds, and the sand as soft as a pillow. The banks as steep as mt cook. The cold swift moving water is surrounding the small island.                                                                    

2 comments:

  1. Good myst description Kaleb.
    Those similes are great.


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  2. Good myst description Kaleb.
    Those similes are great.


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